Wednesday, May 1, 2013

Birthday Giveaway For May!

Hi everyone! It is my 35th birthday this month and in honor of that I am giving YOU ALL a gift. 

Right now DEMON HUNTER: THE CHOSEN ONE is 35% off at Smashwords! 

Hurry and pick up your copy of the one that started the series! 

Just use coupon code KB29Y at checkout. Offer good until May 17th :)

http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/151759


Wednesday, April 10, 2013

Authors in Bloom Blog Hop 2013

Why hello there! Is it spring time already? You wouldn't know it with the crazy weather we've been having!

in any event it is that time of year again when the Authors in Bloom blog hop begins and you, dear visitor, reap the rewards. Not only do you get entered to win prizes like a Kindle Fire and a book giveaway, but you also get to explore new authors you may have not known about before. And we all appreciate that :)

So, let us get down to business.

I'm going to tell you a bit about me, then you tell me a bit about you in the comments section to be entered into the drawing for a free e-book and also the chance to win a Kindle Fire or a Nook.

As my bio reads I have many skills from personal trainer, mixologist, graphic designer, and so on. In the arts you do what you must to pay the bills. But I love to write and have been doing so since I was a little girl. I would hunt and peck with my index finger on my sister's typewriter and churn out short stories. Well I'm all grown up now (in body if not in mind!) and my latest short story is PHOENIX RISING.

Former army sniper John Phoenix has brought his work home with him. As a professional hitman he does very bad things to very bad people for very good reasons.
When Phoenix wakes in a pool of his own blood he finds himself entangled in a deadly plot of gun-running, headed by a former member of his unit.
This time the hit is on the hitman and Phoenix must use everything in his arsenal if he is to survive.
A full packed thriller in a convenient snack size!

Available on Smashwords, Amazon, BarnesandNoble or for FREE if you are chosen as my winner!

Just leave a comment below to enter :)


Do you like to garden? I don't. I've never been any good at it. But my mother used to tend a lovely garden. For those that enjoy gardening here is a tip from Paul James, host of Gardening by the Yard:

1. To prevent accumulating dirt under your fingernails while you work in the garden, draw your fingernails across a bar of soap and you'll effectively seal the undersides of your nails so dirt can't collect beneath them. Then, after you've finished in the garden, use a nailbrush to remove the soap and your nails will be sparkling clean.

I like that one because it could be used in a thriller. Have the killer use the soap trick so blood doesn't get under his nails.

Remember to enter a comment below for your prize opportunity. Blog Hop ends April 19th!

Here is a list of other great authors you can check out:





GRAND PRIZE: We are giving away a Kindle Fire or Nook (winner’s choice) 
along with a $25 gift card for the same.

Friday, April 5, 2013

Walking Dead Season Finale...WTF???

This is my rant on the lackluster season finale of Walking Dead. Beware there are spoilers.

It's been a week since season 3 of Walking Dead had its finale. I've had time to let it all sink in and I even watched it again to see if maybe I overreacted but no, I'm going with my initial reaction: It sucked!
I came in late to this series but I caught up with season 1 and 2 thanks to back-to-back marathons. That's what got me hooked in the first place.
The storytelling was great, the characters were engaging, and who doesn't love a zombie apocalypse story??
Season 3 started off with a bang. They killed Lori and T-dog in one of the most dramatic episodes I'd seen yet. Then they took a hiatus and when they came back from it something had changed. I don't really follow what goes on behind the scenes but I heard they replaced the show runner and I wonder if that had anything to do with the garbage that started spewing out on screen after that.
Don't get me wrong, there were still great moments, but it had lost the initial appeal that originally drew me in. Rick was seeing ghosts, the walkers weren't all that terrifying anymore, and Woodbury was getting on my nerves. But it was all leading up to the big finale. Woodbury v. The Prison. The Governor v. Rick. A huge battle with everything culminating...but that didn't happen.
Instead, there was a lackluster attack on the prison that had more build up than substance. And then someone decided it would be a good idea if they killed off Andrea.
I understand that WD is known for shock value. Nobody is safe even if your name is listed early in the credits. But I have a real problem with the way they handled this particular death. Any other time one of the major characters has died it has been shocking or emotional or both. Andrea's death flat out sucked. If you are going to kill her off at least do it right. They say she went out as a hero...no, it was lackluster and it wasn't believable either. Are you going to tell me that Andrea can go through the woods with a pocket knife and defend herself against three or four walkers but she can't take out Milton? Rewatching the scene I saw that she got completely free of the chair, stood up, and still had the pliers in her hand. She couldn't have just stabbed him in the eye like her usual M.O.?
I suppose what's bothering me is that I liked Andrea. She was one of my favorite characters. I understand that there were alot of haters out there who can't differentiate characters and actors and Laurie Holden was taking alot of heat but is that a reason to kill off a strong female lead? And explain to me how killing off both your female leads in the same season is a good idea? I mean I grew invested in these characters and I want to see them fight on. Michonne and Maggie are good strong females, but I don't give a damn about Tyrese's sister.
I was waiting this entire time for Andrea to get out of Woodbury, rejoin her people, and redeem herself. Then go back to the ass-kicker she was in season 2. That was the Andrea that Robert Kirkman created in the graphic novel. That's the Andrea that I wanted to see, and from alot of her interviews it seems as though that is who Laurie Holden wanted to play. But as actors you do what you are told. I just can't believe Kirkman is ok with them killing Andrea off like that. She had so much more that she could've done.  They never really explored her friendship with Michonne, and in the graphic she is Rick's girl, I was actually waiting to see that happen.
RIP Andrea, you were fun to watch!

I know a movie or a season/series finale is bad when I have to rewrite it in my head. Here is what I would've done: I would've preferred to see a knock-down drag-out gun battle in the prison, something big like we were all expecting.
Back in Woodbury you have a scene where Tyrese tells his sister "I'll be right back"...I honestly thought he was going to stumbled upon Andrea and save her. That is what I would've done. He hears her screaming, saves her just as Milton is going to bite her, she tells him the Governor put her there, he says The Gov just went to raid the prison and the two of them go to stop him.
At this point maybe Woodbury is overpowering the prison. Maybe some of them get injured. It looks bleak and then suddenly Tyrese and Andrea show up. With her sharpshooting skills she wings The Gov and that's when Woodbury withdraws. Then you can have the Gov slaughter them in the field and disappear with his minions. You can still have Carl start acting aggressively. Most everything stays the same except I'm keeping Andrea alive and making Tyrese more active instead of having him sit around like a clueless sheep all the time.
But, if you must kill Andrea off for whatever reason then why not turn her? Why do the women never turn when they are killed? (other than Amy and Sophia)
I think it would've been far more dramatic to have them pull open the door and have turned Andrea standing there. Michonne can get extremely emotional, maybe do a quick flashback of the two of them together from before, and then Michonne takes Andrea's head off. Too graphic? I don't think so, not if you do it right. And I think Danai Gurira could've pulled it off with great emotion.
Hell Merle's death was more emotional than Andrea's and they just glossed over his as well. It's getting to the point where it is no longer shocking when a main character dies. It's more like "oh well, let's move on." 
The way they had Andrea go out, explaining why she did what she did, seems like they were just trying to placate the haters. It reminds me of when Moonlighting introduced Mark Harmon's character "Sam" and everyone was up in arms. Then when they finally get rid of him he looks at the screen and says "Are you happy now?"
It just seems to me they killed Andrea because the fans were annoyed with her actions. A show should stand on the merit of good storytelling and strong characters. If you are always dictating to the audience you have a vast and varied opinion. How can you ever satisfy everyone? If you're true to the story you will.
A better fate for such a strong character would've been to let her redeem herself. Let her get back to the ass kicker like before. Let her rejoin the group. Honestly I feel duped, cheated, and robbed. I'm not happy with that ending and I really feel like she deserved better. And we all deserved a better season finale. 

Saturday, March 30, 2013

A Working Workshop -Get the Most Out of Your Time



A WORKING WORKSHOP
By Cynthia Vespia

I took a marketing class the other day hoping to get some new ideas for promoting my novels. Let me tell you what I learned in said workshop: NOTHING!
That’s right, I sat there listening to ideas that have been around since the Internet was invented, thinking how I could’ve taught this class myself instead of shelling out my hard earned money to hear things I could’ve read in books or online.
Granted, if you’re not Internet savvy; are scared of technology; and have been living under a rock somewhere; then this would’ve been a good beginner class for you.
What I came to realize was that often we think we are clueless about things when in reality we are ahead of the curve.
My upcoming workshop FIGHT CLUB is intended to deliver tips and tricks to authors on how to write believable fight scenes for novels. For some it comes naturally and easily to the page. For others they tend to struggle a little bit.
I’ve presented this workshop as a live demonstration in the past. Using my background as a personal trainer and martial artist, I have members of the audience come up and participate in striking, weapon use, etc.
Although I can’t bring this part of the workshop to you (they haven’t invented that technology yet!) I do hope to impart some tips and tricks that will get you past the sticking point that is a fight scene. It can be daunting at times but the important thing to remember is that it is like any other scene and you must build it from the ground up.
The trick is to make sure it flows with real movement, emotion, and energy. All of that can be learned. Whether you’re writing an epic fantasy, an espionage thriller, or even a romance there is usually an adversary and, most of the time, the antagonist and the protagonist will end their conflict in some sort of fight. Don’t lose your readers when that all important scene comes to fruition. 
 


Fight Club - How to Write Fight Scenes for Novels

Instructor: Cynthia Vespia. Learn the basics of throwing and taking a punch, science & mechanics behind a fight scene, self-defense maneuvers, weapons handling, stunt coordination and strategies, psychological effects by both parties in a fight. Everything you need to make your fight scenes flow and sound more believable on the page. 
WHEN:    Apr 1, 2013 - Apr 28, 2013

COST:   $20 for Premium Members
$30 for Basic Members

Cancellation policy: Registrations are non-refundable except when the workshop is cancelled by Savvy Authors.

REGISTRATION:      Click Here to Register (Members will not receive member rate unless logged in.)

INSTRUCTOR:   
Cynthia Vespia is an author of character driven suspense novels and the creative specialist at Original Cyn Advertising. Her professional background in writing and design spans over a decade. She is also a certified personal trainer and experienced in various forms of martial arts, including Brazilian Ju-Jitsu, Muay Tai, Savate, and JKD.
Tags:    Craft, Plotting, Characterization